Well, I’ve debated about whether or not to do this. Why the hell not?
So here’s the thing. I’ve written not just a short story, but a full novel. I still have a lot of work to do with it. For one thing, I originally wrote it in first person and decided the story wasn’t working. So I’m in the process of converting it to third person. This will allow me to better expand some of the characters and action.
So why am I posting the first chapter?
I’d like some feedback. Please leave comments. Is this something you’d want to read more of? Is something not working? Let me know.
And who knows? I may throw more chapters your way…
Oh, and the title is just a working one at the moment. Not sure I’m 100% sold on it, but I don’t have anything better.
So here goes…